oo- i have some poetry, im new, so any poets here, please critique me.
the weather in my head isnt great right now.
according to others the forecast tomorrow will be better.
but how do i know?
i dont trust them.
i can only see dark gloomy clouds here, the lightning is getting worst, in fact.
i wish it would stop.
i wanna go outside but the thunderstorm is holding me back.